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I need help with my English research paper! I have almost 5 full pages double spaced. It’s about diet pills & persuading adults not to use them. Can anyone tell me what else I can do to make it better?
Some overweight adults think that gaining a few extra pounds here & there have become acceptable over the years. They have in mind that the extra weight will just melt away when desired by popping in a few diet pills. Because of people like this, diet pills have become a multi-billion dollar industry. The weight loss industry offers many quick fix solutions that do not always deliver what they guarantee. The big problem with diet pills is that every single one of them have risks & side effects. Risks will often outweigh the benefits that the user will get from the pills.
Many of us wonder how diet pills really work. Different kinds work different ways. Some diet pills increase the body’s metabolism, helping the body burn more fat. Some diet pills will suppress the appetite, preventing the individual from feeling hungry. Other diet pills contain diuretics, which prevent the excess retention of water in the body. Finally, another type can work by removing fat from the person’s body.
The main ingredients in diet pills were slowly exposed one at a time starting in the 1930’s. Dinitrophenol, or DNP, was first to be reported by two young physicians at Stanford University. They took notes on this element only to find that it possessed a rather extraordinary trait, the ability to speed up the human metabolism. After this information was announced, it quickly appeared creating diet pills across the country. As time went on, fatal fevers & blindness were reported. The U.S Office of Drug Control found a link between the chemical & the deaths. Soon after, the drugs were taken off of the market in 1938. DNP is not a natural occurring element, is it man made. It was originally made for scientific purposes to help with experiments & to make wood preservatives, organic chemicals & dyes. It is now considered by the U.S government to be an environmental toxin.
Since the diet pill industry could no longer use Dinitrophenol, they had to find another ingredient that could perform weight loss miracles. Amphetamines were originally synthesized in 1887, but it wasn’t until about the mid-1940’s that researchers found a medical use for them. They were originally used in over-the-counter inhalants for nasal congestion. Amphetamines were no longer used for a high, or for medication, but as an appetite suppressant. In the early 1970’s, doctors prescribed a type of amphetamine called Benzedrine for weight loss. Those who took the pills found it easy to refrain from eating & enjoyed feeling happier & more energetic. If Amphetamines are not consumed in the right proportion, they can be very dangerous.
Phenylpropanolamine (PPA) is an ingredient that is used in many over-the-counter (OTC) & prescription cough & cold medications as a decongestant. It is also the main ingredient in OTC weight loss products. It is said to be safe when taken correctly. That means that it cannot be taken in any other higher doses than recommended or combined with any other medications containing PPA.
Many of us have heard the motto, “It’s too good to be true.” That saying can often be referred to diet pills. Different bodies react in different ways. For some bodies, swallowing capsules everyday just isn’t enough. Once people realize that it isn’t for them, they have already wasted money. Sure, there are some supplements that are effective, but that does not always guarantee a healthy diet. All of the pills have side effects & many serious health risks. Most diet pills contain caffeine which not only speeds up your metabolism, but your heart rate. These heart problems can very easily cause an extremely fit & healthy adult to have a severe heart attack. All diet pills weaken your immune system so that your body cannot fight off any dangerous bacteria causing you to become frail, resulting in hair loss & less elasticity in the skin. Other risks that may occur is the possibility of anxiety & addiction.
Linda Zimdars, a 30 year old woman just had her second, & final child. She wanted to get rid of her baby fat from being pregnant, so she tried a new diet supplement called Lipospa that might help her lose 10 pounds. Linda began taking the doses once every morning until she became her desired weight. When she quit taking the pills, she instantly gained her weight back. So she bought more pills. Even after maintaining a healthy meal & exercise plan, Linda realized the only way to keep her preferred weight was to take the supplements everyday. After 3 years of this, Lipospa was discontinued. Linda tried other brands, but none of them worked for her. Her body had become immune to Lipospa because she had taken it for so many years. She is now over 300 pounds.
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I recently started homeschooling & part of the reason that my parents chose to was because I had this really weird teacher in highschool. Her hair was completely dyed bright red. And she looks like some kind of dracula, her skin is also kind of tanned so the color contrast of her hair & skin looks reversed. And she is not very professional also. Like when a kid asked why we can only go to the bathroom a certain amount of times in a quarter. She said its so that we get to watch you suffer after you have run out of bathroom passes.
Ok well the bathroom thing was kind of funny but just looking at her gave my parents the creeps, she looks like some kind of dracula. I am wondering how the heck the school would higher such a weird teacher. Are they retarded or something. All of my previous english teachers from middle school & all of my other highschool teachers were normal.